Written Word Blogathon

OK, this is my week to add to the Written Word Blogathon and I gave it some thought all week, but was unable to come up with anything.  Luckily, I work well under pressure.

The first paragraph:
"The sun was edging on the horizon, peaking through silver slits of clouds. She sat there watching, waiting for the end of days. On this day she had wished for a fresh new start. Oblivious to what was really happening to her. She couldn't shake that feeling of being watched. She didn't know who or why,  but she felt it."

My Paragraph:

She looked over her shoulder, but saw nobody there.  The feeling stayed with her as she got up and start to walk back toward the house.  A rustling in the bushes caught her attention as she nervously peered in, squinting to see who or what was there.  A squirrel ran out and toward the large oak tree.  She jumped, but knew that wasn't what made the noise.  She looked in again and said in a low-pitched squeak, "Hello?"

OK, so now I have to tag somebody.  I am going to tag...Churlita, you are up for next week's paragraph.  Have a good evening.